keep up the good work. p.s can you the panel bigger?
I like it. This looks fantastic xD
I'll say this about this comic. It's mostly good; I like the story and were it's going. But I will add this caveat: it is extremely difficult to determine the panel order. It's cluttered and needs to be streamlined. Work on a storyboard and set up the page better. Might help to also expand the page count and enlarge the panels. For example, in a standard comic book, what happens on this one page would take up at least 2, maybe 3 pages.