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Rhonda Falls pg.4 (Colored) by 106Eli Rhonda Falls pg.4 (Colored) by 106Eli
So my hand healed and Vuwah La! Here it is! Page 4 colored. xD 

P.S. Please ignore the scanning quality. I don't know why my printer decided to hate me right now... 

Page 3 (Colored): 106eli.deviantart.com/art/Rhon…
Page 5: 106eli.deviantart.com/art/Rhon…
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Redleg13bangbang Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
keep up the good work. p.s can you the panel bigger?
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nocturna4 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like it. This looks fantastic xD
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BasilioBoy777 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
I'll say this about this comic. It's mostly good; I like the story and were it's going. But I will add this caveat: it is extremely difficult to determine the panel order. It's cluttered and needs to be streamlined. Work on a storyboard and set up the page better. Might help to also expand the page count and enlarge the panels. For example, in a standard comic book, what happens on this one page would take up at least 2, maybe 3 pages.
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